I was in my laboratory and I was terrified to see what it looked like now! My assistant YYY was doing his weird experiment, I shouted to him: “what are doing! Clean all that up!” He shouted back: “Why would I do that!”
“Because you made that enormous mess so clean it up right now!!” I was so angry that I nearly smashed my new laptop that I used to type my experiment result.
After a hour later. YYY finally cleaned my laboratory up and he was so tired that he fall asleep. I can finally start my new experiment. Then YYY’s experiment start to grow…...
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