When my friend and I were in the forest, we looked for a place to hangout. Finally we found a good one. When we settled down, we put our stuff in the bush. Now that we found a place, we played “Truth or Dare.” I was first so my friend asked me “Truth or Dare.” I didn’t want to tell some of my secrets so I said “Dare”. My friend told me to climb a tall tree but I asked “why would I do that?” I thought my friend was crazy so he changed it to an easier one.
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