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Special Prompt #6 - Ashlee


I run up the stairs as quickly as I could, scrambling past all the paintings hanging on the walls, I was shaking, I was so nervous, I could smell the cooked breakfast downstairs waiting for me, today was a HUGE day! I ran back downstairs and stared at the letter written in pink ink, it stated this:
‘Dear L’oreall,
You have been selected as…’
Before I could finish my sister ran in the door, letting a river of emotions flow in,
“L’OREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE”
She screamed rushing towards me
“Oh go-”
Before I could finish my sentence, she hugged me
“What’s that”

She walked towards the letter and shrieked…

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  1. Anonymous28 August 2018 at 17:39

    you used some great vocab like shrieked but it said oh go it should say oh no but it was a great story max room 14 Hamilton

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