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William R. Week #33


As I walk around looking at the mysterious prickles, I wonder if it's magic and it teleports things underneath it. 
"Don't go too close to that", said David.  Man, if there's one thing I know, it's that David is full of...... 
"Go die in a hole", I yell at him.  If there's one thing I could do, I would shove those prickles right in his face. 
"Just saying...I wouldn't walk under it", he chuckles. 
"Pfff, yeah right."   I walked backwards and trip and fall under it.  SQUISH!
"Haha", said David, "See ya Dookie".
I lift up my hand to see a brown sticky substance gooing through my fingers.

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