“Why would I do that?!” I yelled infuriated.
“Oh, I dunno, maybe because you’re JEALOUS”, Julia yelled back
“You’re seriously accusing me?!” I said glaring at Julia. I could see fury, and pain in her eyes, I could tell she REALLY thought it was ME, who did such a cruel thing to her.
She thought, I was the one who made Alex absolutely HATE her, but I would never, I don’t even talk to Alex! Anyways, she’s my best friend, I would never do that to her,even if she wasn’t my best friend, I’m not mean, but whoever did this, has to be horrible...
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