I run up the stairs as quickly as I could, scrambling past all the paintings hanging on the walls, I was shaking, I was so nervous, I could smell the cooked breakfast downstairs waiting for me, today was a HUGE day! I ran back downstairs and stared at the letter written in pink ink, it stated this:
‘Dear L’oreall,
You have been selected as…’
Before I could finish my sister ran in the door, letting a river of emotions flow in,
“L’OREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE”
She screamed rushing towards me
“Oh go-”
Before I could finish my sentence, she hugged me
“What’s that”
She walked towards the letter and shrieked…
you used some great vocab like shrieked but it said oh go it should say oh no but it was a great story max room 14 Hamilton
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